after watching the Burning Low episode on adventure time i quickly made this one i know, it sure doesn't look like them.. turned it into manga style, maybe i shouldn't have shaded flame princess' hair :/
hmmm.. when you work on ink make sure your pen is compatible w/ the type of paper you r using so that it won't blot and has a smooth flow also lightening the pressure on ur hand while outlining will give you less mistakes.. i hope this helps
I think it's perfect! The lines are smooth and clean, you can see the emotion in both characters too. I think it was a good idea to shade Flame Princess's hair, that way you can tell its hers and it doesn't awkwardly blend with Finn's.